MAD DOGS AND ENGLISHMEN
(excerpted from coverage by IFP West Writer's Project Spring 2000)

PREMISE: While studying at Oxford, an American challenges the local extreme sports club to a series of outrageous stunts after he is denied membership in their club. COMMENTS: An energetic romp of an American in London, MAD DOGS AND ENGLISHMEN evokes such comedy successes as REVENGE OF THE NERDS and ANIMAL HOUSE. The humor combines British and American comic sensibilities to great avail. The writing is fresh and entertaining despite what some could consider low brow entertainment. The characters are engaging and winsome, the story satisfactorily builds and the voice is original. It's AUSTIN POWERS meets MONTY PYTHON. The tone is solid throughout and the pacing never tires in its energy. The characters are well drawn and the play of classes between the Americans and the Brits works well here. All of the Mad Dogs have a specific quality and talent that pays of f in the climax. Chris's intentions are clear and motivated. When he's denied membership into the Sports he makes their life hell and finds love. He overcomes the aristocrats like a good American... The use of famous "look alikes" or real people characters plays into the farce genre and provides opportunity for cameo roles. The stunts build in risk and extravagance, thus providing a good background for the characters risks and conflict between the two groups… Making the stunts less "real" gives a more distinct point of view as to the feel and tone of the story. The twist of Edgar being a nobleman and having a connection to the Queen resolves the problem of Chris hijacking her car. Good line when Chris is told "It's the most fun she's had since Disneyland." Satisfying climax segues nicely into a potential sequel. Characters have distinct voices and the writer has an ear for the difference between the English and American tongue. Even the dialect difference between the English is strong here. The writer could be a little bit more tongue-in-cheek and could go even further with the self-aware wit in the dialogue. A good wink at the audience wouldn't hurt with this type of story. The writer can easily get away with it...look how it works for the Austin Powers franchise… Again, it's a fun romp with energetic writing and a good read. MAD DOGS AND ENGLISHMEN is a good, old-fashioned comedy throwback to the prime days of Monty Python.